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The big problem

They have always worked but here are many problems. Workaholic is a big problem because people don´t know this problem. At present many people work around the clock and they don´t have time for other things. This problem has many causes and it also many effects.

First of all, this problem is caused by many managers because at work, the parents have to do many things, but they don´t have many time to do their work. As a results, they are parents that they can´t arrive at home because they have many activities. Secondly, time is very short and parents have many work. For this reason they have to take the activities at home. They use the night and them working at night.
Third, parents wok six days in the week but they have so many work that they don´t have one day in a week. They don´t organize the time and they don´t finish the activities on time. For this reason, they have more activities and work for other days. The last causes have effects.

The first effect is that they have many things to do and them don´t sleep. As results, they have diseases. Another effect is that they have many work but they forget the family.
Parents that have a lot of work don´t think in their little children and the children are teaching to babysitter. The last effect is that they don´t have a family because they only think about work and they don´t have time for other things. For this reason family is the most important.

In conclusion, workaholic parents are very big problem because they don´t know that it is a problem. They have to go to psychologist, and then they talk with their families.

The Egyptian family and his Pyramid

What are the causes and effects of the pyramid of hierarchy in the Egyptian civilization?

Nowadays, Egypt has been changing because in the past the ancient civilization had different rules and laws. For this, I want to speak about the causes and the consequences of taking them.

First of all, the Egyptian civilization had a pyramid.This shows that the hierarchy had the civilization. The pharaoh was the god to which we all should follow, for this reason the pharaoh was not chosen by the people, because the next pharaoh was the succes of the current. Other causes was that there were slaves in the Egyptian civilization. The salves had to do that the pharaohs requested. Also, the Pharaohs controlled to professional soldiers. On the other hand, the farmers and artisans sold products to the pharaohs to survive. when the childrens grew, they had to do the parents´ job. They did not climb in the pyramid. The last causes produced differents effects.

The first effect was that the pyramid change. In 1971 it made a constitution which was explained that it no longer had pharaohs. This year the town had to choose a chairman. And since then so is governed in egypt. There are new rules and laws. Other effect was that since they remove the name of slaves. They were no longer slaves, and they were giving them more opportunities to be equal to others.

In conclusion have been different causes and effects of what it was before and is now in egypt. For this reason it is interesting to know as the Egyptian civilization and which have been changes.

Biography of the images:

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Life of the Egyptians

What are the causes and effects of the Egyptian civilization?

There are different ancient civilizations. All civilizations have left many lessons on the planet. For this, I must take into account what are the reasons and the consequences that they left us. I want to know about the family, the work, the clothes, the meals, etc.

First of all, Egyptian civilizations are centered on rivers this was based along the Euphrates and the Tigris Rivers and their tributaries. The Egyptian family was along the valley of the river NILE, since this civilization planted their own food throughout this, as they don´t have water. Most of the family worked in agriculture. Egypt was divided between the pharaohs for them was almost a god, priests, artisans, slaves. They had a system based on religious beliefs, under the direction of a character Pharaoh semi-divine, usually male, belonging to a succession of dynasties, possibly not the same lineage.

The second point Egyptians ate necessarily two large meals each day: one at dawn and another at dusk. Leads to Egyptians for go to the market to purchase food. They ate plenty of cereal, vegetables, and fruits. The rich soil of the Nile River made growing crops easy. On the other hand, the structure of the Egyptian family was made up of father, mother and children. The father was responsible for providing his family. The mother stayed home and raised the children. Small children and other female relatives lived in a special part of the house. Much of the children's time was spent in training for their adulthood. By age four the children would help their parents in the field or train as craftsmen. The last causes produced different effects.

The first effect was that the Egyptian civilization only worked in agriculture and they knew develop other jobs. At present the Egyptian civilization leave their areas architectural (houses) where they lived. These spaces are tourist zones at this time. Other effect was that by being divided by a pyramidal structure, many Egyptians were poor and they worked for the Pharaohs. For this reason, the Egyptian slaves were exploited by the Pharaohs and they left than slaves die. Other slaves have many sickness and they also has many hungry.The effect of the family structure was that women were not taken into account when decisions in the family.

In conclusion, the Egyptian civilization is one of the civilizations that leave many lessons. At present the culture of this civilization lies in a world and many people want to see how they are developed in the past, this can be seen in the architectural monuments that left us well to visit and learn more of their culture.

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Ancient Civilization

In the past there was too many ancient civilizations who taught us and left us many things. For this reason we have to investigate, because these civilizations displayed as our ancestors lived and know that has changed.

Something was common among the ancient civilizations of China, Rome, Greece, Mesopotamia, Egypt, and India was that most of them started as a dictatorship, a monarchy, or a dynasty.Almost all of the civilizations had one or two great leaders. For example, Egypt had King Tut, Greece had Alexander the Great and Rome had Julius Caesar.

China has had many different leaders through the years. Some of the most powerful dynasties were the Shang, Zhou, and Qin. These dynasties and many others ruled from the times of 1500 BC to 1900 AD.

These ancient civilizations were agriculturally-dependent, it is clear that abundant fresh water would be important.

Most important to early civilizations was the water supply. It also influential are the degree of natural resources and absence or presence of natural barriers. It is no accident that the great ancient of civilization are centered on rivers or river valleys.

Not only were rivers used for irrigating crops and daily water needs (washing, cooking, bathing), but societies also relied on the rivers for communication and transportation.

In conclusion, all the Acient civilizations there were very intelligent and left we too many things and knowlegdes. It is very interesting to know the ancient civilization because they left many thing to visit and know about their culture.

Introduction

In the past there was too many Ancient Civilizations, but I think that the most important than all of them was the egyptian civilization because they were very intelligent people and also they tought we how make too many things, incluided the relationships and roles in the different comunities.

Objetives

My principal objetive is know about the ancient civilization, especially the egiptyan civilitation because they had a realy interesting perspective to saw the life. They had different member roles in the family, this make they the most atractive than other ancient civilizations.