Correction of the test

The big problem

They have always worked but here are many problems. Workaholic is a big problem because people don´t know this problem. At present many people work around the clock and they don´t have time for other things. This problem has many causes and it also many effects.

First of all, this problem is caused by many managers because at work, the parents have to do many things, but they don´t have many time to do their work. As a results, they are parents that they can´t arrive at home because they have many activities. Secondly, time is very short and parents have many work. For this reason they have to take the activities at home. They use the night and them working at night.
Third, parents wok six days in the week but they have so many work that they don´t have one day in a week. They don´t organize the time and they don´t finish the activities on time. For this reason, they have more activities and work for other days. The last causes have effects.

The first effect is that they have many things to do and them don´t sleep. As results, they have diseases. Another effect is that they have many work but they forget the family.
Parents that have a lot of work don´t think in their little children and the children are teaching to babysitter. The last effect is that they don´t have a family because they only think about work and they don´t have time for other things. For this reason family is the most important.

In conclusion, workaholic parents are very big problem because they don´t know that it is a problem. They have to go to psychologist, and then they talk with their families.

The Egyptian family and his Pyramid

What are the causes and effects of the pyramid of hierarchy in the Egyptian civilization?

Nowadays, Egypt has been changing because in the past the ancient civilization had different rules and laws. For this, I want to speak about the causes and the consequences of taking them.

First of all, the Egyptian civilization had a pyramid.This shows that the hierarchy had the civilization. The pharaoh was the god to which we all should follow, for this reason the pharaoh was not chosen by the people, because the next pharaoh was the succes of the current. Other causes was that there were slaves in the Egyptian civilization. The salves had to do that the pharaohs requested. Also, the Pharaohs controlled to professional soldiers. On the other hand, the farmers and artisans sold products to the pharaohs to survive. when the childrens grew, they had to do the parents´ job. They did not climb in the pyramid. The last causes produced differents effects.

The first effect was that the pyramid change. In 1971 it made a constitution which was explained that it no longer had pharaohs. This year the town had to choose a chairman. And since then so is governed in egypt. There are new rules and laws. Other effect was that since they remove the name of slaves. They were no longer slaves, and they were giving them more opportunities to be equal to others.

In conclusion have been different causes and effects of what it was before and is now in egypt. For this reason it is interesting to know as the Egyptian civilization and which have been changes.

Biography of the images:

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